Jessica

http://focussion.com/userphotos/2012/0103/thumbnail/3Ln1kehI.jpg MichaelLynch

Title:: Jessica
Category:: People & portrait
Date taken:: Sunday, August 22, 2010
Location:: South Pasadena, CA
Exif:: 1/60s f/5 ISO 250 52mm
Description:: This photo of actress Jessica B. Kemejuk was taken at the Metro Station. The train was leaving and the sun reflected off of the lens adding this flare and sun spots. The stillness of her pose combined with the motion blur of the departing train, resulted in this composition.

by MichaelLynch 3 january 7 feedback

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@MartinVitek : Thanks for your feedback Martin.
by MichaelLynch 6 January in reply to MartinVitek

@MartinVitek : Thanks for your feedback Martin.
no other comment just perfect...! :-) ....but actually, yes. A beautiful girl.
by MartinVitek 6 January

no other comment just perfect...! :-) ....but actually, yes. A beautiful girl.
@mayukh : Thank you for the feedback.
by MichaelLynch 5 January in reply to mayukh

@mayukh : Thank you for the feedback.
@shailrane : Thanks for the feedback!
by MichaelLynch 5 January in reply to shailrane

@shailrane : Thanks for the feedback!
@Aldor : Thank you.
by MichaelLynch 5 January in reply to Aldor

@Aldor : Thank you.
nice photo here, i like the light
by Aldor 4 January

nice photo here, i like the light
nice lighting and stunning expression
by shailrane 4 January

nice lighting and stunning expression
@MichaelLynch That's true too :-)
by Aljan 4 January in reply to MichaelLynch

@MichaelLynch That's true too :-)
cool snap and great lighting on the hair...she's a bit centered, but the expression compensates those minor issues
by mayukh 4 January

cool snap and great lighting on the hair...she's a bit centered, but the expression compensates those minor issues
@Aljan : Thank you. I appreciate your constructive feedback. A little more panorama may be interesting indeed. Some more motion blur would certainly give more focus on Jessica, but I like the fact that you can see someone sitting in the train carriage as it moves by.
by MichaelLynch 4 January in reply to Aljan

@Aljan : Thank you. I appreciate your constructive feedback. A little more panorama may be interesting indeed. Some more motion blur would certainly give more focus on Jessica, but I like the fact that you can see someone sitting in the train carriage as it moves by.
@luc : Thanks for your feedback. The halo around the face was purely from the reflection of light off of the steel train. Complete creative accident :)
by MichaelLynch 4 January in reply to luc

@luc : Thanks for your feedback. The halo around the face was purely from the reflection of light off of the steel train. Complete creative accident :)
very nice! I love how you kept the movement of the train! Also like the clarity and colours of the girl. The halo on her face really works here i think. Love it! What created the halo?
by luc 3 January

very nice! I love how you kept the movement of the train! Also like the clarity and colours of the girl. The halo on her face really works here i think. Love it! What created the halo?
What do you like?

Really nice, this shot is so in balance. The light is coming from behind, but the front light is perfect too. The lens flare does really well here. It makes it a little magic in combination with the metro in the back. Awesome!

What would you improve?

I would position her even a bit more to the right and might even make it even a little bit more panorama. The metro could even use more motion blur. These two things could add some more drama to it.

by Aljan 3 January

What do you like? Really nice, this shot is so in balance. The light is coming from behind, but the front light is perfect too. The lens flare does really well here. It makes it a little magic in combination with the metro in the back. Awesome! What would you improve? I would position her even a bit more to the right and might even make it even a little bit more panorama. The metro could even use more motion blur. These two things could add some more drama to it.

Jessica

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