One if by land, two if by sea...

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Title:

One if by land, two if by sea...

Category:

Street & architecture

Date taken:

Saturday, September 18, 2010

Location:

Boston, MA

Exif:

1/125s f/5.6 ISO 220 48mm

Description:

I took this while traveling through Boston. This is the church where Paul Revere hung his famous lantern, thereby alerting his fellow brothers in arms to the presence of the British. I'm pretty new at this and I'd appreciate any feedback. Specifically, what could be improved in this picture and how?

Tag(s):

Paul Revere Church

by Jiaozi 12 january 1 feedback

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  What do you like?

  The position of the church is nice. Also the clouds are nice in balance with the colors.

  What would you improve?

  Next time you could try to leave out the tree on the right, it would make your photo more open.
  The dark parts in your photo are just too dark, you could try HDR on this one. And check what would happen if you focus on the dark parts.

  by Aljan 14 January

  What do you like? The position of the church is nice. Also the clouds are nice in balance with the colors. What would you improve? Next time you could try to leave out the tree on the right, it would make your photo more open. The dark parts in your photo are just too dark, you could try HDR on this one. And check what would happen if you focus on the dark parts.