Natural Beauty
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- People & portrait
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niteshkelaskar
What do you like?
beautiful detailing ,excellent model you got ther
Helpful 1 3 May 2012What would you improve?
no, but perspectives would do
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ToujoursBelle
What do you like?
I love everything about this! Her eyes are absolutely stunning, and I also love her nose ring. I love that you've included a "bodymod" as part of her natural beauty. The colors are exquisite. Flawless.
Helpful 1 2 May 2012What would you improve?
I honestly see no need for improvement.
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ducilla
What do you like?
What is not to like here?..A wonderful image that shows attention to every little detail. Nice even light in the eyes and the very soft shadow is just enough to give the viewer a sense of depth without becoming harsh. You seem to have her looking through the camera at the back of your skull! lol.Nice even stare.. A very nice study...dennis
Helpful 1 1 May 2012What would you improve?
LOL. Ok,this is one of those images that your comments will be all over the place.We all want to take this shot and we all would approach it a bit differently.. For me the first thing would be to remove the ear ring. It is in the shadow and fights for a place next to that perfect nose ring.. I have no issue with the lower crop and lack of lower face. I would have cropped the top to just above her eyebrows though and brought the right side in about40% of the dead space that is there.It would have concentrated the viewer in those eyes which is the point I believe?.. These are just random thoughts on a marvelous image and a beautiful young lady...dennis
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dan54231
What do you like?
great well croped and well lit great focus
Helpful 1 26 April 2012What would you improve?
nothing this is a great snap
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rdewind@dan54231 @zamilphotos thank you both for the feedback
27 April 2012
seeing that a lot of people want to see the lips I felt compel to give the background behind this shot, it is actual one out of a series I am doing, a little project of mine called "Doorway to the Soul", normally on a feedback site I tend not to post my website because I normally only want feedback and not to promote myself, but I would rather everyone have a look at the (almost) complete body of work so you can see what I'm doing, so check it out, and if you have a further look around, you'll also find this beautiful model with her full face too
http://rdewind.com/projects/
again thank you all for the great feedback, and I always use all feedback for future shoots so to better myself in this wonderful world of photography, so keep them coming :)
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zamilphotos
What do you like?
smoothness of the skin and beautiful eyes. great use of rule of thirds
Helpful 1 26 April 2012What would you improve?
perhaps including her lips will make the photo more complete.
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rdewind
Thank you all for the feedback
22 April 2012
yeah she had no make up on, that was the whole point of this shoot with her,
I do admit I might of soften the skin a bit to much but that no excuse, I wil keep all of your feedback in mind for my next shoots
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kristina
What do you like?
I love the shot and how her eyes stand out. She is beautiful.
21 April 2012What would you improve?
I would think that natural beauty is without make up. Unless her eye lashes are really that long and gorgious.
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kavian
What do you like?
Beautiful! It's really sharp! The nose ring really gives some edge! I might be the only one out of all the comments that like the crop. I don't mind not seeing the lips. It leaves some to the imagination and make you focus on the eyes.
Helpful 1 20 April 2012What would you improve?
The skin is a bit unrealistic - almost too flawless and smooth, especially the forehead. :)
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mblum4
What do you like?
the color of the eyes ,the position you shot this photo very nice portrait ,Congrats
Helpful 1 20 April 2012What would you improve?
It would be good if you shoot the all face with lips too-it would be more complete ,its an opinion ,,
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MartinVitek
What do you like?
Yeah, so this is very nice.
Helpful 1 20 April 2012What would you improve?
Certainly a beautiful lips. It would be nice to see them. So the next shot... :-)
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maspick
What do you like?
Wonderful eyes and skin tone!
Helpful 1 19 April 2012What would you improve?
Odd place for the crop through her face.
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dakkurt
What do you like?
Very good portrait. Sharpness, colors and framing are perfect.
Helpful 1 19 April 2012What would you improve?
Beauty is OK. Natural (?) not pure.
rdewind@ducilla Thank you for the amazing feedback... =)
1 May 2012