The world is so fast when u stick u fini
- Category:
- People & portrait
- Date taken:
- Location:
- Ahemadabad
- Exif:
- 3s f/3.1 ISO 400 4.3mm
- Description:
- The world is so fast when u stick u finished
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kavian
What do you like?
I like the slow shutter speed, the colors and the dramatic sky. The guy's pose is great too - adds to the drama.
13 May 2012What would you improve?
I'd like to see less of the building and more of the sun. There is something on the bottom right corner that's distracting. The man is centered but I'd like to see him follow the rule of thirds. Add some contrast too. ;)
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harrisonfrancephotography
Oh and crop the building out, it will completely give impact on the sky and person :) Well done
12 May 2012-
aakil@harrisonfrancephotography
13 May 2012
Maria Blumberg,,
Thank you everybody for your point will take of all the suggestion next time thanks
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mblum4
Aakil really apologize because i was thinking maybe i didnt understood your message ,,,your photo pretty cool, an well done ,nice composition ,,what happen can be difficult every day I am here almost a day and got many images to analize what means from everbody, to understan a photography but i watch all the photographers here -and I have to tell my opinion,,,but I am surprise any here goes and takes time to watch my photos---I didnt understan well your photo but now i stopped and watched again,,,its really cool,,,sorry if I was wrong ,,,, i just apologize ,I really like this photo it means for you that we stick and live betwen offices and a fast world ,,,am I right ?hope you forgive me ,,bu i reallly i watched many photos that you got here ,so beatifull too blessings Maria Blumberg,,
13 May 2012 -
harrisonfrancephotography
What do you like?
I disagree, I Think this photo is perfectly composed. The sky is perfect!
12 May 2012What would you improve?
Changes to make: Using windows live photo gallery:
Contrast fully up
Shadows and highlights turned all the way down.
Colour temperature down to the bottom.
Tint all the way to the top
Saturation ever so slightly down.
LOOK AT THE DIFFERENCE! AMAZING! -
mblum4
What do you like?
well Im honest to with you,its a fast world but how you can show in this image the fast things ,,,i dont understand at ,maybe the sun who moves around us ,the earth that 24 hours finish the day,make a thinking more deep about this subject an after that you makes a photo more significant ,,,it so much to think ,that the years also goes fast ,even when you wake up the world just woke up so fast than you ,,-makes a photo more impresive ,even i like the subject ,,,,the photo is a bit confuse to the people who is very sensitive as me ,sorry,,creation also shows who you are put love and more significant things around you and others ,to show in photography,,,we are not alone ,,,we are here to help each other to grow in this art ,if you want to show the fast movements in the world ,,you have so much to talk in photos ,,,
12 May 2012What would you improve?
welll i tell you the image is good but not mucha attracted to this-it could be better if you show more envolved in
aakil@kavian
13 May 2012thank you so much i agree to the fact that the bottom right is distracting .. if you give it a closer look you'll see how perfectly the shadow moves to the distraction .. which i presume got you atention to the bottom right :)
I am new to photography .. if you can just tell me what the rule of thirds is i'll aplly the same to some future images .
regards..
kavian@aakil The rule of thirds is a rule of composition (placement of elements in a photo). Copied from Wikipedia: "The guideline proposes that an image should be imagined as divided into nine equal parts by two equally-spaced horizontal lines and two equally-spaced vertical lines, and that important compositional elements should be placed along these lines or their intersections Proponents of the technique claim that aligning a subject with these points creates more tension, energy and interest in the composition than simply centering the subject would."
13 May 2012Example (look at how the lines follow the tree and the horizon):
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/c/ce/Rivertree_thirds_md.gif
aakil@kavian
13 May 2012again thanks man