Delaney
- Category:
- People & portrait
- Date taken:
- Location:
- South Side Sports Complex
- Exif:
- 1/800s f/3.1 ISO 80 4.5mm
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OmYeu
I would love to see her smile :))
28 May 2012 -
ignatz
What do you like?
Hmmm I really have to disagree with the first post I really like this shot. It feels very real and candid. I like how you are relating the subject to the playground elements on her right and the horizon. I can tell you are really thinking about those relationships.
27 May 2012What would you improve?
I think i would play around with whats in and whats out of focus a little more. I actually like the crop not being full figure i think it makes it a little quirky but I might tweak it a little more so that the whole thing feels more intentional
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vintagephotograph@ignatz thank you! some actually postive feedback! I understand what you said and appreciate your feedback! :)
28 May 2012 -
ignatzI meant to say I disagree with "frank" not the first poster
28 May 2012 -
vintagephotograph@ignatz oh well thank you! glad you liked it! :)
28 May 2012
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OmYeu
she looks so restrained I think
27 May 2012-
vintagephotograph@OmYeu i respect your opinion. Do you mind being a bit more specific?
28 May 2012
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frank
What do you like?
nothing,,,as i dont believe the model would be impressed with this shot
25 May 2012What would you improve?
we have ears and posts competing for attention...and the shed in the backgroud left upper has his say,yet the eyes and lips are taking second place to what could have been a simle good shot.Just an opinion though
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tluvr
What do you like?
I like the expression captured in this photo, I too think that an 'all body shot' of the same expression and same angle might give it even more impact, but I still like this shot too.
22 May 2012What would you improve?
I would use a different f stop and shutter speed combination so that all the background was blurry, I think that would add even more impact to the subject, as it is I find the background, house, picnic table, and soccer goal net, become distracting to your nice shot of this young girl.
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vintagephotograph@tluvr thanks for your feedback. i will get the same model and location and try it again. i will post the new picture when i can.
24 May 2012
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mblum4
What do you like?
its nice photo,lyou should take the all body and the photo will look nice ,its good to shoot complete subjects ,but its ok for me now ,
22 May 2012What would you improve?
try to shoot many as you can in differet angles
vintagephotograph@OmYeu well actually i was going for a different approach, i have other pictures of the same model and she has a great smile but i thought a more depressed expression would go well with the background and lighting and also the wind slightly blowing her hair.
28 May 2012