Her Guardian Angel

http://focussion.com/userphotos/2012/0522/thumbnail/3Nv7vY2T.jpg FranciscoJoelHernandez

Description:: Portrait I took of my girlfriend's cousin. This was taken on the 9/11 and she was remembering her brother who's life was taken in Operation Iraqi Freedom.
Tag(s):: portrait family Female teen Her Guardian Angel

by FranciscoJoelHernandez 22 may 2012 3 feedback

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wbadecs

The flash makes the image looks like it is in a studio and does not match the sky in the background, not sure if the dark background is of interest but could of used fill-in flash.
28 May 2012
PhotoLore

What do you like?

The light is just perfect. I like how the sky is still lit, even though you´ve used some light on the subject

What would you improve?

I´m not sure, I guess the pose. Maybe - if you wanted the shot to express, by itself, anything from the description - you should have made her pose differently. I guess facing to the camera but looking a bit upwards would have looked nice, with her hands in front, placed together somehow.

22 May 2012
mblum4

What do you like?

I like the portrait ,nice scene and the composition ,very nice background ,itsa great shot ,as I should add that every peopl ewho lost the life in war,,,deserve the honor of being called an heroe I ,great shot -Congrats

What would you improve?

IIts a nice shot ,,not any I can add

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