- Category:
- People & portrait
- Date taken:
- Camera:
- Canon EOS 7D
- Exif:
- 1/64s f/2.8 ISO 400 48mm
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Evve
What do you like?
The look of the young girl in this photo is absolutely fab, very intense and dramatic, great conversion towards black and white,great shot
21 OctoberWhat would you improve?
I'd leave the motorbike out off the shot because the girl makes the shot all by herself :)
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MartinVitek
What do you like?
Beautiful photo, good content, nice transfer to BW.
3 June 2012What would you improve?
But I would probably eased off a bit from the left. So it is very regular and I miss a little tension there, a little momentum.
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halowormsbey
What do you like?
i quite like this...the subtle black and white is especially appealing while there are some great blacks
30 May 2012What would you improve?
nothing i like it as is
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Moopsz
What do you like?
I love the texture of the wall, and the black and white. The wind blowing in the har, it's all quite great.
I also like the model's pose.30 May 2012What would you improve?
IMHO, there are two subjects. Motorcycle and Model. They appear to be competing for the space in the photo. I would suggest cropping a bit the space on the left of the motorcycle.
Finally, I just wish there was a greater connection between motorcycle and model. You could add a prop, helmet or jacket. Or have the model's body directed toward the motorcycle.
Just my toughts tough :) -
Wbrittanyrose06
What do you like?
I like the movement with the hair and the strong contrast.
29 May 2012What would you improve?
I am distracted by the words written on the wall.
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fredclarkphotography
I like the tone and subject matter, the only thing is the model is so static and stiff, this may be the intent? a little less space to the left as well
28 May 2012 -
mblum4
What do you like?
I love the image , like the composition,the theme very nice ,also it would be good to set the model in the motorcicle and find a good position with her there ,,its an idea but I love the photo Congrats
28 May 2012What would you improve?
i would shoot the model in many positions in this place with the motorcicle too,its an idea ,,,you can shoot many angles too