geisha
- Category:
- People & portrait
- Date taken:
- Exif:
- 1/250s f/11 ISO 100 42mm
- Description:
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- Tag(s):
- girl Conceptual woman Geisha
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halowormsbey
What do you like?
i like the colours (surprisingly other than the eyeshadow) love the fan. lovely cheeky eyes
Helpful 1 28 June 2012What would you improve?
a more even backdrop or more dramatic lighting as im not keen on the background and the front not matching up...and i agree about the chopstick comment all in or . lastly....perhaps pull a little more red out of the skin just for that geisha white look
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stacie
What do you like?
Love the color of the eyes paired with the color of the picture.
5 June 2012What would you improve?
Not sure I like the color of the background on the right side. Also, would like it more if the chopsticks weren't cut out.
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mblum4
What do you like?
i like the expression of the geisha ,i think could be more complete composition if she was using the dress they have ,they are pretty cool,but its a nice image
5 June 2012What would you improve?
i like the tones but ,it could be more strong tones and brilliants colors too,,
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Arianrod
What do you like?
I really like the composition, the light and the color tones. And, most of all the symmetry. Congrats!
Helpful 1 5 June 2012What would you improve?
There's not so much to improve. I think I would have chosen a wider angle.
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DennisG
What do you like?
G'day Anil, While I can understand your intent in making this photograph I cannot help but feel it doesn't quite work for me in this presentation. The hair and its "chopsticks" are just too messy for my taste and the topedge of frame cutting them off looks like a mistake as it does not add anything to the image. But all is not lost, look at my suggestion below. 8-) I feel this photograph still has great potential. GB D!
Helpful 1 5 June 2012What would you improve?
Scroll the screen down until the end of the "chopstick" above the model's left ear just disappears. This will now give you a very powerful portrait in a square format with the eyes becoming the very strong focal points they should be in a portrait. (This may mean chnaging the title).