Vintage
- Category:
- Digital darkroom
- Date taken:
- Location:
- backyard
- Exif:
- 1/800s f/1.0 ISO 100
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mebeahm
What do you like?
The layering effect is spot on.
Helpful 1 14 June 2012What would you improve?
I agree, the blue tones could be improved, but other than that, it's perfect.
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JustInMusing
What do you like?
Interesting and beautiful! The subjects themselves are interesting and I like that they're a bit withered (your color tones complement this well). I also like the stark contrasts.
Helpful 1 14 June 2012What would you improve?
I would reduce the blue tones. I like the browns, but the blues throw it off for me (I'm sure you'll find differing opinions on this). On the edges especially, the blues almost look like chromatic abberration rather than a part of the mood.
The focus doesn't appear to be spot on. Are you really at f/1.0 for this photo? I'd narrow the aperature. Ideally, I'd try to get the front flower totally in focus and the blur the ones in back. -
mblum4
What do you like?
I love the flowers ,,very nice ,I like ,the colors and I love the composition ,nice shot ,
9 June 2012What would you improve?
i like as it is ,excelent