Reflection
- Category:
- People & portrait
- Date taken:
- Location:
- Paris
- Description:
- Picture of a friend on a trip to Paris. Its cropped a bit tight i know, anything else need to improve on?
- Tag(s):
- reflection portrait window black and white
- Others also liked:
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MartinVitek
What do you like?
The perfect expression. Beautifully readable feelings.
26 June 2012What would you improve?
Maybe I would image less bent. But this is just a small thing.
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halowormsbey
What do you like?
like the crop and the black and white. it has a nice level of contrast
26 June 2012What would you improve?
personally would like to see the whole crop moved one inch left so more face than reflection. but you will quite likely have a reason you didnt or this was the best shot etc... i like it
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NewZealand
What do you like?
Very nicely done I agree with the other love the tight crop. This shot does tell a good story. Well done.
11 June 2012What would you improve?
Leave it the way it is great job.
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vanessalou
What do you like?
i love the tight crop! it leaves so much to the imagination as to what he's looking at, where he is going and iwhy there is so much sorrow and mystery in his eyes. this photo is beautiful! i think you've done a perfect job!!
11 June 2012What would you improve?
nothing, its wonderful! i really really love this shot!
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KatiePhotographie
I actually like the tight crop! love his expression too. Incredible. Really, all I'd want to see is this photo taken somewhere where the outside was less distracting (maybe a field instead of cars/buildings). That would put more focus on the reflection, and would take away some distracting elements. But really nice work otherwise.
11 June 2012 -
mblum4
What do you like?
I like the exporession of sadness and the composition ,its amazing image,the reflections in black and white ,nice job and shot ,,Congrats
10 June 2012What would you improve?
well, I think in colors will be good too ,,
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DennisG
What do you like?
G'day Louise, This very fine b&w gives me a sense of sadness and melancholy, The man's expression also evokes empathy and sympathy. Therein lies the strength of this photograph. GB D!
Helpful 1 10 June 2012What would you improve?
I suggest toning down any bright highlights outside the window to remove their distraction. (Justathort!) 8-)
louiseashley@halowormsbey Thankyou for your comment, and it was on a coach and i was 2 rows in front, so left of his face is actually a head rest! so cant make it any wider..ops! Thankyou! :)
26 June 2012