Old mariner
- Category:
- People & portrait
- Location:
- Trani
- Camera:
- Canon EOS 60D
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KatiePhotographie
I feel like the composition of this shot would improve dramatically without the car. With the current editing/lighting, it almost feels like they were two separate pictures merged together. Plus, the car is just distracting from your main subject! And I love the subject.
11 June 2012 -
dan54231
What do you like?
like the effect gives an old timey feel
12 June 2012What would you improve?
there seems to be an aura around the man would reduce the line luminocity
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mblum4
What do you like?
well i love the composition ,,,its nice black and white image but i like with the car too,,you can do another shot without the car ,but also you can clear or dark the background a bit and get an amazing photo too -
11 June 2012What would you improve?
well i think you thought in the composition with the car too ,,you will chosse what to do ,,ithink its better to get dark the background ,it will be good
Trinit@KatiePhotographie @dan54231 @mblum4 Thank you all, for the composition, sorry about that. It was a street shoot and I didn't have the time to compose well the image. Yes, at start I thought the composition to be with the car, to give and old/new effect.
20 June 2012About the aura, that's my main concern (given that I can't adjust the composition with his missing feet), I'm still learning to use Adobe Camera Raw brushes, so I failed in that
You were all helpful!