Flying bee (different and corrected)

Photo Flying bee (different and corrected) by dakkurt

http://focussion.com/userphotos/2012/0614/thumbnail/3NRhnCyu.jpg dakkurt

Category:: Macro & detail
Date taken:: Sunday, May 27, 2012
Location:: Istanbul, TR
Camera:: Canon EOS 600D
Exif:: 1/1024s f/4.6 ISO 200 60mm

Description:

Previous one was none touched. But this one has a grass on subject. My friend Altan Yaman corrected/deleted grass.

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by dakkurt 14 june 2012 12 feedback

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dakkurt

@luc hope you like this one..
14 June 2012
- lucyo @dakkurt, I missed your comment. Ok, here is what i think. I think its awesome that you get the insect in focus while flying. What I dont like is that there is too much going on in the picture. Flower and bee are fine, but we could do without the rest. Basically, its the background which has too much detail, which distracts the viewer from the bee. Is this a 60mm Canon Macro lens?
  21 July 2012
- dakkurt@luc thanks for expert critics. Every critic is welcomed. This frame is some more post-processed. But is only cropped. I like to express nature as it is, or as seen.
  22 July 2012
Outline

try to tone down white floral, if possible

very nicely captured, great action
11 July 2012
- dakkurt@Outline thanks for kind comment.
  22 July 2012
Cutieblackbear

What do you like?

The detail and action that the photo displays.
It's intricate and elegant.

What would you improve?

Maybe crop a bit off of the left side; that way it's more focused.

19 June 2012
- dakkurt@Cutieblackbear thanks for kind comment and critic.
  24 June 2012
zamilphotos

What do you like?

the vibrancy and capture of the bee.. more importantly, the sharpness of the bee's body.

What would you improve?

a wider frame will add to the composition. nevertheless, this shot is amazing as is.

15 June 2012
- dakkurt@zamilphotos thanks for kind comment and critic.
  24 June 2012
Colleen

What do you like?

Another great macro shot!! Great action here!!

What would you improve?

Maybe a touch more contrast but that's it. It's a great shot!

15 June 2012
- dakkurt@Colleen thanks for kind comment. I will look for better contrast variations.
  15 June 2012
niteshkelaskar

What do you like?

great timing and compostion with the bee.

What would you improve?

may be a little more detail

15 June 2012
- dakkurt@niteshkelaskar thanks for kind comment. Yes I will try for better on details.
  15 June 2012
senoch

Very nice. Great shot!
15 June 2012
- dakkurt@senoch thanks for kind comment.
  15 June 2012
roofus

nice shot , great pic , i like the photo
15 June 2012
- dakkurt@roofus thanks for kind comment.
  15 June 2012
mblum4

What do you like?

its beautifull shot. i like the bee here flying ,amazing ,very good shot ,,,ilove it ,,

What would you improve?

its a nice shot m,i love it in this way

15 June 2012
- dakkurt@mblum4 thanks for kind comments.
  15 June 2012
ibedowns

What do you like?

Great shot!! I love seeing the action of the bee. I myself like my subject to be a little off-center, so I think its great as it is.

What would you improve?

It's nice as it is.

14 June 2012
- dakkurt@ibedowns thanks for critic. Because of the distracting background I have to croped this way. But I will try some variations.
  15 June 2012
Roberto

What do you like?

all for me is great!!

What would you improve?

maybe try some differend crops

14 June 2012
- dakkurt@Roberto thanks for critic. I wil try for different crops.
  15 June 2012
mebeahm

What do you like?

I love the movement and sharpness

What would you improve?

I'd possibly center the bee so you're eye is drawn directly to the subject rather than the grass/flower. Good work

Helpful 1 14 June 2012
- dakkurt@mebeahm thanks for critic. I wil try for better crop.
  14 June 2012