Portrait

Photo Portrait by kavian

http://focussion.com/userphotos/2012/0619/thumbnail/3NVZ9DeT.jpg kavian

Category:: People & portrait
Date taken:: Monday, June 18, 2012
Camera:: Nikon D3100
Exif:: 1/160s f/4.0 ISO 3200 50mm

Description:: Please leave feedback. :)
Tag(s):: portrait

by kavian 19 june 2012 5 feedback

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eyenotion

What do you like?

I like the composition and the feel of the photo.

What would you improve?

Like others have said, the hair is way too dark. Perhaps time to play with some flashes :-)

20 June 2012
- kavian@eyenotion Thank you. :)
  24 June 2012
- kavianHere's a revised version. Let me know what you think. I've edited the hair and more. :) @eyenotion @Colleen @mblum4 @Mirhan
  
  Link: http://www.flickr.com/photos/kavianborhani/7481232586/in/photostream
  1 July 2012
Colleen

No problem! It's always great to shoot in RAW. Since I started using RAW I haven't turned back to JPEG.
20 June 2012
- kavian@Colleen I know, right? Makes a huge difference! :)
  20 June 2012
Mirhan

Composition is good,the colors also,his black hair is blacked out which is unfortunate.
19 June 2012
- kavian@Mirhan @Colleen @mblum4 Thank you. Since I have the RAW file, it should be hard to lighten the hair a bit! Great tip!
  20 June 2012
Colleen

What do you like?

I like the overall idea. Comp is good and the colors, really captured the mood.

What would you improve?

I agree, it would be improved by just a bit more light and have the hair stand out a tad more. I also feel this would make a great black and white as well.

19 June 2012
mblum4

What do you like?

I like this exression ,verynice ,,i like the colors you got in the face,,,just nice ,,,its lots of meaning in this -its a nice shot

What would you improve?

i woul try to fix a bit the background ,and try to fix the hair a bit less dark ,but i like the image

19 June 2012