Guitar

http://focussion.com/userphotos/2012/0626/thumbnail/3O2kx739.jpg boomblichka

Category:

Nude & body

Date taken:

Saturday, June 9, 2012

Location:

Zagreb, Croatia

Camera:

Canon EOS 500D

Exif:

1/32s f/5.7 ISO 100 24mm

Tag(s):

music guitar

by boomblichka 26 june 2012 5 feedback

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  Tonnyyuswanto

  What do you like?

  inoccent like a cupid...love it

  What would you improve?

  i dont have any to improove this

  3 January

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  Skinsfan

  What do you like?

  I like the idea for this image. Not a bad image for a snap shot.

  What would you improve?

  I don't care if it's not original because lots of things have been done over some good some bad just do something to make it your own. I agree with being underexposed on the models left side, maybe a different camera angle ( lower) not sure. The background for me is a mess if your going to have wrinkles then have wrinkles if you want it smooth the have it smooth.

  15 October

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  bjorn

  What do you like?

  Not terribly orignal but a nice idea nonetheless. Pose is OK and the neck of the guitar is positioned along a diagonal which helps the viewer through the picture.

  What would you improve?

  It's way underexposed on the right. I'm guessing this is taken next to a window and no light on the other side. Put some white cardboard there to reflect light. Also try to get rid of wrinkles in the backdrop but it's not easy when using bed sheets. Framing could be a little tighter (less head space) and watch out for perspective distortions. At 24mm focal length and looking down a bit the subject's right foot is a bit stretched. Ideally use a longer focal length if you have enough room to back up.

  15 August

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  Arianrod

  What do you like?

  I only like the idea of the photo, but it's not so original.

  What would you improve?

  Well, I would improve: the pose, the light, work bit more on the model facial expression and the background.

  15 August

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  mblum4

  What do you like?

  i like the look as a guitar but i think you could do a nice photography of music- artistic photography,- avoiding much of nudity,even its so natural,i think you can see the beauty more attracted covering the body with a nice night dress ,but i like the image even though........

  What would you improve?

  i think as an image natural artistis is ok ,but i would appreciate to do something beautifull ,between the nature ,its lots to do artistics image of nature

  26 June 2012