black sky stone

http://focussion.com/userphotos/2012/0702/thumbnail/3O8qAsmz.jpg markavgust

Category:

Nude & body

Location:

Ukraine, Odessa

Description:

Odessa 2012
MUA & hairstyle: Алена Орловская

by markavgust 2 july 2012 8 feedback

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  ruthgillson

  What do you like?

  I really like the concept, mood and composition of the photograph.

  What would you improve?

  I am wondering if increasing the contrast of the subjects may help to further define, as there isn't enough separation for me between the background and the subjects, especially re. the bird and the rocks. Or if there's a way to soften the background slightly.

  11 November

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  wilsol

  its a very tastefully shot.
  The bird makes it powerfull

  11 November

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  Mssphotography

  What do you like?

  Wow, that's a cool shot.

  What would you improve?

  I would have had her cover the nipple, it would have looked better. now it looks more like a nipple slip.

  11 November

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  Outline

  What do you like?

  the parallel look from the raptor and the model are interesting!

  What would you improve?

  fine shot, but I would prefer a different composition, perhaps crop the right side - about 20% off

  31 July

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  sharkskin

  What do you like?

  The the lighting on model is great.Very tastefully shot

  What would you improve?

  Try get the eagle to stand out a bit more,it blends into the backgroung.

  29 July

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  Arianrod

  What do you like?

  Well, that's a photo with a great impact. Totally great for the composition, the light and model. (+ the birdie :D)

  What would you improve?

  I would crop the right side. In this way you could add more space in the line of her sight

  8 July 2012

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  Ernstjanvandam

  What do you like?

  Wow that's very powerfull. Really mysterious! Great lightning as well. How did you light this?

  What would you improve?

  maybe the background and composition slightly

  4 July 2012

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  mblum4

  What do you like?

  well the bird is nice here ,the combination is good ,but i would dress this woman totally different ,witha satin or black colors,even nature of a woman is nice ,i think you can add some clothes here that show a bit his best parts resalting her hair or eyes l, ,

  What would you improve?

  it would be interresting to show more the eyes or hair wich is more important ,in her face

  4 July 2012