lost harmony

Photo lost harmony by deyabhij

http://focussion.com/userphotos/2012/0707/thumbnail/3Ocvz7hF.jpg deyabhij

Category:: People & portrait
Date taken:: Sunday, October 10, 2010
Location:: India

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by deyabhij 7 july 2012 9 feedback

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barrington

What do you like?

I love the expression in the face, I really like the way the light is used to create a mournful mood.

What would you improve?

I really don't like the texture of the background and the dress. I think something smoother would help the photo.

8 July 2012
Outline

What do you like?

great pose, like the eyes

What would you improve?

Only small adjustment - I would clone or crop the edges -don't like the white specs on the outside, very nit-picky, so you can leave where u are.

7 July 2012
avinashnt95

What do you like?

lyk d styl of d portrait,, really good

What would you improve?

nothing, except d merging of the gown and backdrop

7 July 2012
frank

What do you like?

Beautiful portrait.One can feel the sadness.

What would you improve?

Nothing at all.Love the shot

7 July 2012
Jodyg

I know everything element in a portrait is non-excitant when the subject eyes comes alive and is really looking at me and no one else.
jg

Brilliant
7 July 2012
Jodyg

What do you like?

I would love to tell her " rest lay you head down and all will be ok" you have made this real to my eyes now I speak to her as your work provided that for me.

What would you improve?

I will not say a thing about this fine exposure. Home run

7 July 2012
Aljan

What do you like?

Amazing portrait and I agree with the others. I actually love the colors you are using, well done.

What would you improve?

I'm curious about how the photo would be if you wouldn't add the textures and the border. It might look a bit more natural and could have more impact, but I'm not sure.

7 July 2012
DennisG

What do you like?

G'day Abhijit! Such a mournful, melancholic expression caught beautifully in this very fine portrait. There must be great rapport between you and your model to create such an image. The pose so aptly supports the expression as does your processing on this image. Wonderful work man. GB D!

What would you improve?

I would not even dare to suggest you alter anything. 8-)

7 July 2012
mblum4

What do you like?

i like the feeling of lost armony in this image ,the colors and the composition very well done - nice shot

What would you improve?

i think is good as it is

7 July 2012