Ship Ahoy 2

Photo Ship Ahoy 2 by NewZealand
NewZealand
Title:
Ship Ahoy 2
Category:
Other
Date taken:
Camera:
Pentax K10D
Exif:
1/500s f/9.5 ISO 400 14mm
by NewZealand 16 february 4 feedback

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  • NewZealand

    @modedial Wow thank you :)

    by 17 February in reply to modedial
  • NewZealand

    @CraigHarris Thanks for the feedback. Going to have fun with this ship was just thinking next full moon I may got do some more shot see what happens.

    by 17 February in reply to CraigHarris
  • modedial

    @NewZealand yeah great hobby and you are good at it

    by 17 February in reply to NewZealand
  • CraigHarris

    I prefer this to your previous shot, I agree with @roderikk and I think that you should get a little lower and leave the horizon a 3rd of the way up the picture, being slightly further to your left might help a little too.

    by 17 February
  • NewZealand

    @modedial Thanks fro the complement. need to get a fog machine that could be fun.

    Yes I have a Google+1 account have not used it for long time still need to figure it out. I have a face book account I use a lot. just started to post my work on there. This is all just a hobby for me at this time but was thinking of doing up sets of greeting cards to also sell on our website.

    by 17 February in reply to modedial
  • modedial

    @NewZealand that boat with fog and a blue tint = Awesomeness although i think it looks great as it is i am just imagining it coming out of the fog

    are you on Google+ i think you would get a lot of followers on there

    by 16 February in reply to NewZealand
  • NewZealand

    @roderikk Thanks for the feedback I did a little processing I can see where you talk about the mountains thats the opening to the bay. I could try to shift the ship some hehehe Next time we get a storm in at high tide I'm going out to get some more shots. I think we have a high tide this evening at sunset. if there are no winds I will go up and do some long exposure with a nd filter to get the fog look of the water around it.

    by 16 February in reply to roderikk
  • roderikk

    What do you like?

    I love the detail in this shot, and how the green on the ship is also present on the sand in the beach. I like the depth in the image as well. Did you process it to get this amount of detail? Definitely an object worth exploring though!

    What would you improve?

    I think there is a slight halo around the darker parts of the ship contrasting with the lighter sky. Probably due to a little bit over use of sharpening. I feel there is some detail lacking in the shadows. Most importantly though I think it looks a little bit strange to have the hills in the background go 'into' the ship and not come out the other side. To me that creates quite an imbalance.

    by 16 February