- Nature & landscape
- Date taken:
- Tankwa Karoo, South Africa
- 1/50s f/16 ISO 200 24mm
- I'm not totally happy with the compostion.
I don't really want to go into reasons as to why just yet, but i'd like to get some feedback on how you would have framed this. I've already cropped off the top and bottom, so that can also be re added if needed.
- hdr desert mountians
nice still , great pic ,,, i like the photo24 July 2012
1 23 July 2012
Forgot to add, not related to framing, I really like the rich colours on the mountain side and the cool blues reflected in the distant clouds and mountains on the horizon. You could try very slightly brightening, or adding a touch more contrast to your photo to add a bit more visual interest.22 July 2012
I actually quite like the composition here. I find the various lines and where you've placed them quite interesting. I love that you've put your horizon across the centre of the photo and that the line of the mountain, that goes from almost the top third of your photo to the bottom left corner, is almost perfectly mimicked in the black clouds. If I were to crop it again I think I'd experiment with cropping it closer still, putting the bottom left corner right before that first drop in the mountain side (so, taking about an inch off the bottom and an inch and a half off the left side that way the line of the mountain side actually does perfectly intersect with the corner of your photo). I'm curious to know what you don't like about the composition of this photo?Helpful 1 22 July 2012