a little to late
- Category:
- People & portrait
- Date taken:
- Exif:
- 1/125s f/2.8 ISO 80 6.0mm
- Description:
- this is my friend Mae. this was taken after the zombie photo shoot. its a shot I've always wanted to do.
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photolee1975
What do you like?
Love this shot , great DOF, great subject.
29 NovemberWhat would you improve?
Would not change anything, it's perfect as it is.
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arkei
What do you like?
The play with perspective and depth of field: nicely complemented by the lights & darks in the well executed b'n'w post production.
29 NovemberWhat would you improve?
Maybe playing with different setups of pills, boxes and the like: I am sure it's already very near perfection, but worth trying or looking again at the other pictures that you must have taken for sure...?!
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GreyRoom
What do you like?
XO TILL SHE OVERDOSE... I LOVE THE FEELING OF THIS SHOT.
28 NovemberWhat would you improve?
A LITTLE MORE CONTRAST WOULD BE GOOD BUT I LOVE THE SHOT.
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RachelAlene
sharkskin, thank you. i very much like this photo.
3 August
and thanks everyone else for the feedback -
sharkskin
What do you like?
Great shot,I like the way you have the pills and hand in focus and her out of focus .(Drifting away)
3 AugustWhat would you improve?
nothing to improve,I like it as you shot it .
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sepiashutters
What do you like?
Initally I really love the idea for this photo, it really speaks volumes, but there are just a few things I noticed. Still a great photo, but there's a bit of a posing issue.
Helpful 1 26 July 2012What would you improve?
The focus is great and where it should be. But where she is concerned, the model (Mae) is too relaxed. Just think of how many ways your could die from an overdose, and what things would happen - liver failure, heart rate increase, blood pressure issues that could cause stroke - it's not always the straight and narrow you're going for. Getting some rigid, cold, cramped forms could also add the efffect of the body being there awhile. Again I love the concept and the focus, but just think of the details before taking the shot. Think of what you want the photo to say.
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LeonComa
What do you like?
"....and the moral of the story is..." A good effort even if it looks a bit too contrived :)
Helpful 1 26 July 2012What would you improve?
Add grit. Bend the elbow so that her hand and the pills/capsules are closer to her face. Use fewer pills and show more of the container in her hand. Relax the fingers cos her pose does not suggest a violent death.
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mblum4
What do you like?
its an image that maybe can be used as an advertisment to struggle against to the compsumition of drugs and ,,,as a photography is a good composition ,perhaps you wanted to show this,i like the black and white , the image is too centrated in tthe hand ,and pills ,
26 July 2012What would you improve?
well i think the image is too centrated and the woman too blurry,you shot really fast here as a photography is very interesting ,but doesnt show a portrait ,as the woman is so blurry