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http://focussion.com/userphotos/2012/0730/thumbnail/3OyO9Mf8.jpg MartinVitek

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People & portrait

by MartinVitek 30 july 8 feedback

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  sincejan63

  What do you like?

  A beautiful woman is always good, she make the shot here

  What would you improve?

  I can't find anything wrong here

  21 August

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  sfields

  What do you like?

  I love the lighting in this photo. Beautiful soft light.

  What would you improve?

  I'm not sure I'm liking the fact that the bottom of her left hand is cropped off in this position. It looks like some other person's hand actually.

  7 August

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  Mithra

  Nice back light... Excellent

  31 July

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  Outline

  What do you like?

  nice frame, excellent colors in model clothing, separates her from background

  What would you improve?

  no changes in this capture

  31 July

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  ViewsOfParadise

  What do you like?

  Beautiful model Martin and another great photo.

  What would you improve?

  The model appears to have more darker eyeshadow on the side of her right eye as compared to her left eye.

  30 July

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  mblum4

  What do you like?

  I like the portrait ,the way you captured the beauty of the model,nice exposure ,the composition ,the blue dress ,all is in balance

  What would you improve?

  itsa good portrait ,,and well done all here

  30 July

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  AlexandraLauren

  What do you like?

  The lighting in this is incredible - I'd love to learn what your lighting set up was, and how you achieved this. You've lit her face with a soft box and then have you back lit as well? Either way the white/silver outline of the back lighting on your model is beautiful and immediately drew my eye into your image.

  What would you improve?

  I'd be interested in seeing a crop of this image that included her bottom elbow. Everything about her pose, the arm up draped across her head with the fingers pointed down, and the arm up touching her chin, makes her look very long and, to my eye, the square crop feels a little too short/squat for how you have her posed. Beautiful image, the background with all the soft green bokeh is gorgeous as well.

  30 July

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    MartinVitek@AlexandraLauren
    Many thanks for your words...
    There are all positions: http://strobox.com/fashion/17547
    ....and then some time post :-)

    30 July

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    AlexandraLauren@MartinVitek Cool, thanks!

    30 July