OPI Shatter

http://focussion.com/userphotos/2012/0731/thumbnail/3OzoyLQ6.jpg chindijap

Category:

Macro & detail

Date taken:

Saturday, October 29, 2011

Exif:

1/3s f/5.0 ISO 200 43mm

Tag(s):

black black and white splatter nail polish opi shatter

by chindijap 31 july 4 feedback

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  sepiashutters

  This interests me very well, but work on it before calling it great. You'll have to at least crop out the window; even if you were going for an empty, small feel for the person seeing the photo. If you weren't going for that, crop it closer for some great detailing contrasty shots.

  14 August

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  Dylanswifty

  What do you like?

  I think I like where you were going with this and I agree that the B&W was a good choice

  What would you improve?

  Focus more on the main point you're trying to get across, it seems a bit cluttered with no real focus or subject

  14 August

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  kidloco

  What do you like?

  Good choice to go black and white on this one.

  What would you improve?

  i do not know what is on the picture. Try going lower and focus on the main subject, tiles on the back and window is distracting, cable on the right too. Why you shoot 1/3 s with ISO 200? Bust that ISO a little bit so you can get a little bit faster shutter.

  5 August

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  shreya100

  What do you like?

  Great compositing! I love the idea behind it.

  What would you improve?

  The object on top left is a bit distracting

  31 July