Coffee on the rocks
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PASM111
What do you like?
Good concept and good timing with the drips. This has potential, just needs some "pop".
11 August 2012What would you improve?
Up the exposure a little and maybe sharpen the image a tad. The left side of the glass is fading into the background. Something about the positioning, centering is throwing me off. The horizon is slanted, but the glass and spouts look straight (is the machine curved on the front?). I would crop a little tighter on the bottom and the left side (get rid of the vertical line on the left side).
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mblum4
What do you like?
i like the composition of this image -the light at the end that you used here its good element ,I like the shot -
10 August 2012What would you improve?
i think as a whole image is good ,,maybe playing with shades and light would do this mage so interesting, I thinlk the feel is good -maybe a bit of exposure would show other effects -i think you can also to take another image in a coffe maker ,throwing the liquid coffe,set good light and shades ,it can be interesting as an image too
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shreya100
What do you like?
Nice composition. The way the orange light from below the glass fills it looks very beautiful
10 August 2012What would you improve?
I think I would try increasing the exposure but only a little bit. The glass is not exactly in the centre. You could try cropping the photograph from the left a little bit to make it apper in the centre. Also a part of the machine on the top right is a bit distracting.
eisber@PASM111 The machine is curved, but what the visible curved line is part of drawer - it is curved on top.
13 August 2012