Vael
- Category:
- Nature & landscape
- Camera:
- Nikon D3100
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Everm014
i like the contrast of the flowers on the black background
29 August -
Tonnyyuswanto
What do you like?
the dept of field is marvelous. dark background support the main object in foreground.
29 AugustWhat would you improve?
the upper left object disturbs the main object below.
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barrington
totally agree. Just want to add that I like the sparkles coming off the petals. Very nice.
17 August -
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Patricia
Well I could just repeat what Kavian said but I can also wright that I agree with him!
13 August
To me the little white flower in the back does not compensate enough for the black area in the rest of the shot.-
sepiashutters@Patricia @kavian @mblum4 Thanks guys. So forget that flower in the back and crop it down?
14 August -
kavian@sepiashutters exactly. :)
14 August
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kavian
What do you like?
I like the black and white and the idea
13 AugustWhat would you improve?
Try moving closer and only focus on the three flowers at the bottom. :)
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mblum4
What do you like?
I like the Dof in the main white flower ,I like the composition ,the contrast between the flowers and the leaves needs a bit of definition ,but i like the capture of the flowers
13 AugustWhat would you improve?
i think i would clear a bit the dark area ,getting definition in the contrast ,or if you turn to color ,i would crop part of the black area,the leaves I see ,i think would not affect the quality in the composition ,moving the flowers right and left ,you can get better angle to see a good symetry of the flowers ,,,but i would love to see this in colors
sepiashutters@barrington Thanks. It had just rained that evening, so I frammed a shot before going on my way.
18 August