Watergarden
- Category:
- People & portrait
- Date taken:
- Exif:
- 1/100s f/5.6 ISO 800 21mm
- Description:
- A shoot I did a few weeks ago, with a very photogenic girl.
If youre curious about the rest of the photos:
http://fashionitions.blogspot.de/2012/08/the-watergarden.html
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arkei
What do you like?
The open shade look of the whole scene.
11 OctoberWhat would you improve?
There's too many items sharp in the image: Try with a longer lens by stepping back and limiting the sharpness to the model only, with a little sharpness on the tree trunk and the branches that go into the water - this would give you better separation which could be enhanced even more if you shot in candescent-light WB with a CTO-gelled speedlight on her.
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suzeque4
What do you like?
I like the way the tree limbs draw your eye to the girl. She looks relaxed and natural.
9 OctoberWhat would you improve?
If possible, add a little depth to the water with color/shading.
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tsise
I like the subject but over exposed
22 August 2012 -
sepiashutters
As this ISO it's no doubt you got overexposure. Lower it, and crop out some excess shrubs that get in the way of the subject. This would also be great from an overhead angle over the girl; just in case you've a chance to do it again.
22 August 2012 -
sincejan63
What do you like?
The subject is position nicely, great framing
21 August 2012What would you improve?
way over exposed, lacking detail
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Dylanswifty
What do you like?
I like the overall feel of this photo and I really like where you were going with this
21 August 2012What would you improve?
I have to agree on exposure but I think It could actually work really well if you got closer to the girl but still kept the blown-out background
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sharkskin
What do you like?
Like the subject and the idea.
21 August 2012What would you improve?
too bright in the background and mabey a bit far away.
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kanonkop
I also find this one a bit over exposed, and the light is quite contrasty and harsh. I had a look at the other photos from the shoot and there is some great ones there, esp the close up ones of her against the trees.
20 August 2012 -
mblum4
What do you like?
i like the portrait just done in the nature I,like the composition -good portrait
20 August 2012What would you improve?
i think you have to work in the exposure i believe you got a overlighted image maybe caused by the time you took the image ,i think you can work in the exposure with photoshop elements 4 ,its one online express i use ,,its so good ,,to adjust included the color ,the light , shades,brighting ,its nice image ,you can work to develop this image better ,