- Category:
- People & portrait
- Date taken:
- Location:
- Barcelona
- Camera:
- Nikon D3100
- Exif:
- 1/400s f/2.0 ISO 3200 50mm
- Description:
- Hi!
I don't know if the dead space works well on this picture. My intention was that it would add to the person's emotions.
By the way, am I the only one who can't find an proper title to my pictures? - Tag(s):
- portrait dead space
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marribas
Good portrat!! For a simple shot like this, I thing the title is right. Good expression, good grainy effect (Well ISO 3200 is supposed to be like this), and personally I think that the void at the right of the model rounds the picture up perfectly well. Although the model's pose is very rigid, the unbalanced weight of the picture breaks the staticity. Well worked. You know, you could use as a PC background with all the icons at the left. Surely looks great. I like this one very much, thanks for sharing.
8 October -
Serenity85
What do you like?
I like the thoughtful expression. The composition is good overall, and I like the lighting and monochrome treatment.
10 OctoberWhat would you improve?
The Negative space is good, however your model needs to be looking into it. I find that when I follow his eyes I'm drawn out of the image. Either have him look to his right, or alternatively you could position him to the left of the frame.
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Evve
What do you like?
I really love your comp here, the pose and the thoughtfull pose of the model....Very well balanced portrait and I like the grain, it suits the photo :)
9 OctoberWhat would you improve?
I have moved the photo up a bit onto my screen and I do think the portrait would be even more in balance if you'd get rid of the "dead space" at the top......but then again photo's are allways also a matter of personal taste :)
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dan54231
What do you like?
the expresion and dof in this
9 OctoberWhat would you improve?
less dead space and shoot in higher light iso is to high here the grains show through alot
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mblum4
What do you like?
I like the expresion in this image ,i like the eyes telling something about you ,you can set the tittle as this "Emotions Side Feeling"if this can help -I like the photos I see from you ,,,very special good composition and a nice capture ,,,
9 OctoberWhat would you improve?
i think the portrait is nice and i dont think any improovement
kavian@marribas @Serenity85 @Evve @dan54231 @mblum4 Thank you very much for your feedback! :)
12 October