- People & portrait
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- 1/200s f/2.8 ISO 320 16mm
- I need your over all critique
1 11 November 2015
I really like this composition/idea. Very Creative.Helpful 1 4 November 2015
If I may be totally honest, it just isn't believable to me. I'm guessing you have two images 'shopped. The main image appears to be shot just after sunset, however, in the second image with the stars and Milky Way, you can see bright stars all the way down to the horizon where only the very brightest stars (if any) would be visible at that time. Maybe dialing back the exposure on the bottom of that image with a graduated ND filter in post to eliminate most of the lower stars may help. At the same time, I would play around with the exposure of the umbrella. For me, it seems over exposed quite a bit but this is all subjective. Other than that, I really like the idea. Did you use a strobe umbrella or are you using a speedlight or flashlight into it?