- Category:
- Street & architecture
- Date taken:
- Location:
- Sarajevo
- Exif:
- 1/100s f/20 ISO 200 31mm
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mmcintyre24
What do you like?
Great composition. The colors and leading lines are on point
15 February 2017What would you improve?
The people are somewhat distracting since they aren't your focal point. Perhaps at a slightly different angle, they could have been avoided.
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meltopo8
What do you like?
My first impression is that this is a really nice photo! I like the subtle colors and not too much contrast. Like the slight angle and that you included the whole lamp post.
19 December 2015What would you improve?
It's out of your control, but it would be nice to see this without the wall.
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meltopo8Oh..so is that what the benches are facing? It might be hard to include the water and still get a nice angle on the buildings. But it's always great to play around with different shots!
Helpful 1 19 December 2015 -
ProbaYes, the benches are there to face the river. If you take a look at the right side of the photo, you can see a small som stone bridge.
20 December 2015
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maspick
What do you like?
Well captured with great detail and lovely tones. I find it curious that the benches are facing a brick wall, so I ended up focusing on that part of the image to the exclusion of pretty much everything else after the initial viewing.
Helpful 1 18 December 2015What would you improve?
As Erwin indicated, removing the shadow in the lower right corner would help some. Perhaps a bit more contrast and some selective burning on the bright buildings to give more detail there a chance to be seen.
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Erwin
What do you like?
Interesting linear lines created by the buildings, cars, the small wall and the pedestrian walkway. Architectural characteristics are clearly defined.
Helpful 1 14 December 2015What would you improve?
I might just exclude the dark shadow in the bottom corner.
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Proba@meltopo8 thx for feedback. This wall is actually a bank of the small river, you can see a bit of water below. Maybe I should have included the river in the photo as well.
19 December 2015