- Category:
- Macro & detail
- Location:
- California
- Exif:
- 4.5mm
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vonprond
What do you like?
It's a good subject for photography. It's good in b/w, and catching the drop is excellent.
What would you improve?
It's way over-processed. I'm not at all sure about the angle, I would have preferred a 'natural' presentation. The HDR/sharpening processing doesn't add anything here - it would be much stronger as a high-contrast b/w photo without the special effects.
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Erwin
What do you like?
I like the diagonal line created by the pipe. Clever monochrome choice and a feel of the HDR treatment. Interesting presentation which still leaves a lot too the imagination.
What would you improve?
Nothing it is great as is.
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vonprondFunnily enough I think that would have worked better if the drop were not there - it creates a disorienting effect - and while that can sometimes be good, here I don't think it is. I do think this is a good idea overall, but would be much better within a slightly simpler approach - you know, less is more :)
17 December 2015
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meltopo8@vonprond Interesting thoughts. The angle is to give a boring every day object to a different perspective. Thanks for your feedback.
17 December 2015