http://focussion.com/userphotos/2015/1219/thumbnail/2Yj1AapNmwRzJ.jpg
Proba
by Proba
19 december 2015
3 feedback
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pepsimax28
What do you like?
Like the metallic tones and the subject.
What would you improve?
Perhaps focus on one lock and have the other locks slightly blurred in the background?
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meltopo8
What do you like?
What I like is the potential of this photo.
What would you improve?
The current tone tends to blend the image. I would have done black and white tones, or add more contrast to the current tone. My eye seems to wander trying to find a point to focus on. Perhaps focus on one interesting lock surrounded by the others.
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Erwin
What do you like?
I like the tight crop and full frame, with unique over all tone.
What would you improve?
A small bit more over all exposure to brighten the image somewhat.
Proba@pepsimax28 thanks. You are absolutely right, this way it looks a bit undetermined.
20 December 2015