http://focussion.com/userphotos/2015/1219/thumbnail/2Yj1AapNmwRzJ.jpg
Proba
by Proba
19 december 2015
3 feedback
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pepsimax28
What do you like?
Like the metallic tones and the subject.
Helpful 1 20 December 2015What would you improve?
Perhaps focus on one lock and have the other locks slightly blurred in the background?
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meltopo8
What do you like?
What I like is the potential of this photo.
Helpful 2 20 December 2015What would you improve?
The current tone tends to blend the image. I would have done black and white tones, or add more contrast to the current tone. My eye seems to wander trying to find a point to focus on. Perhaps focus on one interesting lock surrounded by the others.
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Erwin
What do you like?
I like the tight crop and full frame, with unique over all tone.
Helpful 1 20 December 2015What would you improve?
A small bit more over all exposure to brighten the image somewhat.
Proba@pepsimax28 thanks. You are absolutely right, this way it looks a bit undetermined.
20 December 2015