http://focussion.com/userphotos/2016/0314/thumbnail/2fl1AFfer6fKp.jpg
lenslife
- Category:
- People & portrait
- Date taken:
- Location:
- Bury
- Camera:
- Nikon D3000
- Exif:
- 1/2s f/1.3 ISO Array 74099371mm
- Description:
- East lancs railway Bury
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johndunkle
What do you like?
This is stunning. All the highlights are intact, the darks have detail - and - it's a wonderful composition... To me, it is a "moment in time" - well captured and beautifully post-processed.
20 March 2016What would you improve?
I'm just wondering out loud here, as it were... What would happen if you played with bringing in the left side a bit - to give some room to the right, which is where he is looking - so our eyes naturally go? While the "center- upper third" on the eye plane works well, I'm just wondering if it wouldn't work just a bit better cropping into something like the grey thingy in the reflection within the window - and leaving that reflection, so we have visual depth?? But - that's your call.
Just awesome...