- Abstract & conceptual
- Date taken:
- 1/400s f/5.6 ISO 100 48mm
Interesting..... I never thought I'd say this - but.... Nicely done! I like your effect with the monochrome conversion as well.. A nice eye....Helpful 1 4 May 2015
OK - you have a lot going on near the right side of the image - which, well - unbalances me a bit? It is easily fixed tough... How?
Can you crop the left a bit? Yep - see the screw head on the top left? Yep - right about there - BUT please leave the shadows in, it gives the image "depth"... Perfect! You changed the aspect ratio a bit - but, so what? This image works in either, as it is abstract - not a landscape.. ;)
Next - see the two High-Lights? Those are screw heads as well.. I do NOT want you to "clone them out", but rather - select them, and bring them down a bit so they fit a bit better and are not distractions, OK?? Try that - and let us know if it works...
Finally - let's be daring ;) I want a vignette in the RIGHT TOP of the image - just to keep my eye from wandering.. At about the same value as the bottom right. Watch what happens..
Emily? Nicely done!!! And welcome to Focussion!!! We can't wait to see more of your images and projects posted - and OH - let me know if you have any questions about what I wrote above, OK??