http://focussion.com/userphotos/2015/0713/thumbnail/2xr1zer4I2qZX.jpg
erikawhit
- Category:
- Macro & detail
- Date taken:
- Exif:
- 1/83s f/5.7 ISO 250 55mm
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carrotbic
What do you like?
I love the idea of this photo! Bringing out the smoking log into focus works well.
2 August 2015What would you improve?
I would like to see a bit more color if possible. It also seems the the log slightly loses focus as it leads up to the smoke. Having the entire log in focus may help with the composition a bit. Other than that, nice photo!
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ejespo
What do you like?
An interesting photo with the smoke coming out of the top of what appears to be a rock. The rock is position nicely in the frame. Exposure seems spot on.
Helpful 1 13 July 2015What would you improve?
I'm not sure what this is. Maybe a more detailed title would help. The background is a bit confusing. I have a feeling I would like this more if I knew what the photographer intended to show.