http://focussion.com/userphotos/2015/0722/thumbnail/2691zhPmxzbp5.jpg
ioanv
- Category:
- People & portrait
- Camera:
- Nikon D700
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ioanv
Hi Mike, hi Linda. I've tried to act on your suggestions. Please find below a new version of the picture.
25 July 2015
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skypilot
I would have to agree with Mike on this one. I have looked at this shot but hadn't yet commented on it.
24 July 2015 -
Flyer01
What do you like?
Hi Vlad. This is a nice shot of the child which is well focussed with good colour and exposure.
24 July 2015What would you improve?
To me the background whilst being well out of focus is distracting, The light area is to bright and the blue to vivid. I think this would be a much better shot if they were toned down. Just my thoughts. Mike.
Flyer01@ioanv Hi Vlad. I think you have made some improvements but I think I would have gone further especially with lowering the bright light area. I think I would mask the girls head and play with adjusting the background area, darkening and perhaps de saturating. If you submit another revision please send me a message to let me know I only came across this one while looking for something else. Mike.
1 August 2015