Esplanade Yatch Club

http://focussion.com/userphotos/2011/0826/thumbnail/3JoP5w9K.jpg Alexlky

Title:: Esplanade Yatch Club
Category:: Concert & theatre
Location:: River Front City
Description:: Critique are most welcome. Thanks

by Alexlky 26 august 7 feedback

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@Ammolan you're welcome :)
by JosephineChaplin 1 September in reply to Alexlky

@Ammolan you're welcome :)
I really appreciated for all effort and opinions given. Zoom effect is a bit tough for capturing nightscape and neon light, will go into more practice. And thank you, Josephine! it's a very good suggestion of crop for that windows. By pulling down the right side bar, the result could be seeing. Thanks , Bjorn & Kanonkop, the exposure for the 6th are 3 times longer. EV 163s, a ND8 & ND8 grad. Cheers! Alex.
by Alexlky 1 September

I really appreciated for all effort and opinions given. Zoom effect is a bit tough for capturing nightscape and neon light, will go into more practice. And thank you, Josephine! it's a very good suggestion of crop for that windows. By pulling down the right side bar, the result could be seeing. Thanks , Bjorn & Kanonkop, the exposure for the 6th are 3 times longer. EV 163s, a ND8 & ND8 grad. Cheers! Alex.
it's true it's busy but....wow I love it ! the concept is great, the colors too. I maybe would have liked the bottom a little bit cropped (we can see windows or something similar on the bottom left and it's too figurative to fit with the abstract photo)
by JosephineChaplin 31 August

it's true it's busy but....wow I love it ! the concept is great, the colors too. I maybe would have liked the bottom a little bit cropped (we can see windows or something similar on the bottom left and it's too figurative to fit with the abstract photo)
ah - i see it now! you've taken about 6 photos as you were zooming in..
by kanonkop 27 August

ah - i see it now! you've taken about 6 photos as you were zooming in..
This is quite confusing. As mentioned before a lot is going on. It could be a good abstract picture, but after a while I start recognizing things and it doesn't really work for me. It's also a bit too busy as a night view with a twist.
by bjorn 26 August

This is quite confusing. As mentioned before a lot is going on. It could be a good abstract picture, but after a while I start recognizing things and it doesn't really work for me. It's also a bit too busy as a night view with a twist.
i agree that it is a busy photo, and quite confusing. however, i find that nice. i keep looking at it, trying to figure it out. so, as an abstract photo, i like it
by kanonkop 26 August

i agree that it is a busy photo, and quite confusing. however, i find that nice. i keep looking at it, trying to figure it out. so, as an abstract photo, i like it
@tommy @tommy Hi Tommy, thank you for the comments. You're right that 5 zoom play in long slow shutter taken from my apartment window.
by Alexlky 26 August in reply to tommy

@tommy @tommy Hi Tommy, thank you for the comments. You're right that 5 zoom play in long slow shutter taken from my apartment window.
@ViewsOfParadise I appreciated your comments very much. Thank you so much for your in depth review of my photo. This photo is direct upload from Jpeg, without any adjustment.
by Alexlky 26 August in reply to ViewsOfParadise

@ViewsOfParadise I appreciated your comments very much. Thank you so much for your in depth review of my photo. This photo is direct upload from Jpeg, without any adjustment.
I agree with @ViewsOfParadise, this is a very busy photo. It looks almost as if its taken through a window with 5 panes of glass reflecting the lights outside. I think this picture would have been better with a bit less going on.
by tommy 26 August in reply to ViewsOfParadise

I agree with @ViewsOfParadise, this is a very busy photo. It looks almost as if its taken through a window with 5 panes of glass reflecting the lights outside. I think this picture would have been better with a bit less going on.
Interesting photo in that there is WAY too much going on for me to enjoy. I was trying to figure out where /what the christmas tree looking colorful items cam from. The photo looks like a compilation of multiple different photos combined together.
by ViewsOfParadise 26 August

Interesting photo in that there is WAY too much going on for me to enjoy. I was trying to figure out where /what the christmas tree looking colorful items cam from. The photo looks like a compilation of multiple different photos combined together.