- People & portrait
Nice indian face30 September 2011
Thanks guys. I know the face is light, that's my thing i guess http://www.fotolook.nl/components/com_joomgallery/img_originals/portret_10/sized_img_8676-2_20110926_1027882907.jpg there you can see a larger one and to me there is detail on the skin and eyes. But i know that i push it to the edge and some think it's over even. I like it and i love all of your feetback so thanks again!30 September 2011
Nice portrait, little girl looks upset her mood really shows here. I agree that parts of her face have lost some detail due to lighting, would like a little more detail in her eyes as well. All in all well done and can be perfect with some slight changes29 September 2011
Very nice portrait.29 September 2011
I like how you've allowed the top of her shirt to dip down below the frame.
The shadows around her collar bones, neck & chin are wonderful, as well as along the sides of her nose. bu I agree that the cheeks and tip of nose are definitely washed out too much.
This would be really mint, if only the skin exposure and texture here were more like what you have in this other shot:
Wouldn't mind seeing the highlights dodged ever so slightly more in her hair, particularly around the neck/shoulder region.
Something about the toning on the shirt is bothering me, however.
There's a coldness there, which is out of character with the rest of the image. It seems like you did that purposely, especially after I compare again with the other shot I referenced above ("Noah"), which has similar toning.
I'm wondering why you might have done that.
That's a great portrait! I like her facial expression and I would want to know what she is thinking :) But in my opinion her cheeks and parts of her nose are a little bit too bright. I think it would be nicer if you see could see a bit more of the skin. By the way, I like the tone of the portrait! :)29 September 2011