Lucie M-AT-10

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Lucie M-AT-10

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Nude & body

by MartinVitek 9 december 4 feedback

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  for some reason the pose is not very feminine.... but i dont know how to improve it.

  by luc 9 December

  for some reason the pose is not very feminine.... but i dont know how to improve it.

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  What do you like?

  I like the lines, and the fact that you see her profile, so she is not just a body there is a face to her. I really like the lighting as well very good lighting.

  What would you improve?

  The only thing that caught my attention is her left knee is faded out somehow and same for right hand. I am not sure if it's from a white vingette or what but that is the only thing that is a bit distracting.
  
  other than that very nicely done as always. :D

  by Colleen 9 December

  What do you like? I like the lines, and the fact that you see her profile, so she is not just a body there is a face to her. I really like the lighting as well very good lighting. What would you improve? The only thing that caught my attention is her left knee is faded out somehow and same for right hand. I am not sure if it's from a white vingette or what but that is the only thing that is a bit distracting. other than that very nicely done as always. :D

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  @MartinVitek You're welcome. :-)

  by Aljan 9 December in reply to MartinVitek

  @MartinVitek You're welcome. :-)

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  @Aljan
  Many, many thanks Aljan...

  by MartinVitek 9 December in reply to Aljan

  @Aljan Many, many thanks Aljan...

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  What do you like?

  Really cool! I like the light and the centered composition. Nice to see a little bit of her eye too, makes it more exciting.

  What would you improve?

  Maybe her body could be in total symmetry, I can image that's hard. But it might make the shot stronger.

  by Aljan 9 December

  What do you like? Really cool! I like the light and the centered composition. Nice to see a little bit of her eye too, makes it more exciting. What would you improve? Maybe her body could be in total symmetry, I can image that's hard. But it might make the shot stronger.